Popcorn Popping (comments are always welcome)

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Popcorn Popping (comments are always welcome)

Postby Olsenpotter » Fri May 08, 2009 10:19 am

Popcorn Popping

How do I pop thee? Let me count the ways.
I pop thee to the depth and breadth and height
my bowl can hold. The ovens blaze
creates, so like a god, your puff of white .
I pop thee to the level of every day's
unheard of need, by sun and fluorescent light.
I pop thee freely, as a master might.
I pop thee purely, with only hot air.
I pop thee with the passion put to use
in my mistakes, and with my business care.
I pop thee with a love I seemed to lose
with my burnt attempts. I pop thee with chocolate,
BBQ, Ranch, all the flavors of my life; and, if God is no villian,
I shall but pop thee better with chicken bouillon.
I'll leave you a note in the freezer.
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Postby mae » Fri May 08, 2009 5:09 pm

That sound you hear is Elizabeth Barrett Browning turning over in her grave!

mae
My heart beats in poetry. I think in rhythm and dream in rhyme.

Give me a crit! I can take it!

CELTIC QUEEN, an Epic Poem, Cynthia M. Bateman, amazon.com, barnesandnoble.com, http://www.tatepublishing.com/bookstore ... +Epic+Poem at Tate Publishing
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Postby mslover » Tue May 12, 2009 1:36 pm

ROFL!!! does someone like popcorn??

"Winter must be cold for those with no warm memories - we've already missed the spring"

"Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass; it's about learning how to dance in the rain."

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