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Willingly Naked

Postby Olsenpotter » Fri Feb 14, 2014 9:16 am

I just wanted to share the poem I wrote for my wife for Valentine's day.

Willingly Naked
There are so many disjointed parts to me I feel like a mirror hit dead center with a sledgehammer.

What keeps me together? Why does my reflection not display the dark, jagged edges filling my insides?

The answer is simple: like a master artist, you’ve taken the fragments of my being and fused them into a stain glass window.

My appearance, outside and in, has undergone a metamorphosis at your touch.

My pride is in your arms.

My success is in your smile.

And I can face the sun willingly naked confident your love has framed the shards of me into a masterpiece of a man.
I'll leave you a note in the freezer.
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Postby Delaney » Thu Feb 20, 2014 7:36 pm

Awww.... :-D
<i>It may help to understand human affairs to be clear that most of the great triumphs and tragedies of history are caused, not by people being fundamentally good or fundamentally bad, but by people being fundamentally people. - Terry Pratchett</i>

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