Easter Egg Hunt in an Uncertain Climate

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Easter Egg Hunt in an Uncertain Climate

Postby mae » Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:47 am

We normally have an Easter egg hunt for all the grandkids who are around, but yesterday the weather just stunk. You could almost swim in the air, it was raining so hard. So, what to do? Well, first, write a poem about it! So, here it is.

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Easter Egg Hunt in an Uncertain Climate

Here I hold an egg for Easter
that would be hidden but for this northeaster
to which I've lost my Easter bonnet
with all the lovely frills upon it.

My skirt blew up around my ears
exposing the extent of my arrears!
So this year our hunt is simplified
and will be held entirely inside.

I hold out my fists – guess which one!
Oh you found it! Isn't this fun?
My heart beats in poetry. I think in rhythm and dream in rhyme.

Give me a crit! I can take it!

CELTIC QUEEN, an Epic Poem, Cynthia M. Bateman, amazon.com, barnesandnoble.com, http://www.tatepublishing.com/bookstore ... +Epic+Poem at Tate Publishing
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Postby mslover » Tue Apr 14, 2009 11:31 am

ROFL! awesome mae! Love it!

"Winter must be cold for those with no warm memories - we've already missed the spring"

"Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass; it's about learning how to dance in the rain."
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Postby mae » Tue Apr 14, 2009 2:48 pm

Why thank you, dear ms.

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My heart beats in poetry. I think in rhythm and dream in rhyme.



Give me a crit! I can take it!



CELTIC QUEEN, an Epic Poem, Cynthia M. Bateman, amazon.com, barnesandnoble.com, http://www.tatepublishing.com/bookstore ... +Epic+Poem at Tate Publishing
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Postby TheMudge » Wed Apr 15, 2009 11:13 am

HAH!

Love it!
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Postby mae » Wed Apr 15, 2009 12:47 pm

Thank you, Mudge. mae
My heart beats in poetry. I think in rhythm and dream in rhyme.



Give me a crit! I can take it!



CELTIC QUEEN, an Epic Poem, Cynthia M. Bateman, amazon.com, barnesandnoble.com, http://www.tatepublishing.com/bookstore ... +Epic+Poem at Tate Publishing
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Postby Mlou » Thu Apr 16, 2009 5:07 pm

Yeah, I'll take the left fist! Did I win???? Great job, mae.
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Postby mae » Fri Apr 17, 2009 7:39 pm

Thanks, mlou.

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My heart beats in poetry. I think in rhythm and dream in rhyme.



Give me a crit! I can take it!



CELTIC QUEEN, an Epic Poem, Cynthia M. Bateman, amazon.com, barnesandnoble.com, http://www.tatepublishing.com/bookstore ... +Epic+Poem at Tate Publishing

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