take a peek at this, if yall would, thanks a bunch!
raindrops in silver form
float away, the moon is warm
stand upon a crater there
and make a footprint for your chair
see yall, cool beans!
new kid's poem
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It's cute. It's descriptive. I have no idea what you're talking about, but I'm used to that . . .
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Hey choclatbubl
I like the way it sounds on my tongue. But like Mudge, I'm unsure of the subject. If you are so inclined... perhaps you could share with us what your thoughts were when you wrote it.
I like the way it sounds on my tongue. But like Mudge, I'm unsure of the subject. If you are so inclined... perhaps you could share with us what your thoughts were when you wrote it.
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Also, Jillstar is nicer than I am.
"Throughout history, Truth and Love have always won." - M. Ghandi
"Truth and Love often get the crap kicked out of them along the way." -D. Mudge
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