new kid's poem

[choclatbubl]

take a peek at this, if yall would, thanks a bunch!


raindrops in silver form
float away, the moon is warm
stand upon a crater there
and make a footprint for your chair

see yall, cool beans!

[TheMudge]

It's cute. It's descriptive. I have no idea what you're talking about, but I'm used to that . . .

[JillStar]

Hey choclatbubl

I like the way it sounds on my tongue. But like Mudge, I'm unsure of the subject. If you are so inclined... perhaps you could share with us what your thoughts were when you wrote it.

[TheMudge]

Also, Jillstar is nicer than I am.

[choclatbubl]

hey thanks for the comments.
really, i dont know what i was thinking, i just liked the way it sounded and the words came out. i guess its one of those nonsense poems. ever read 'em? they're pretty funny.
but i dunno. i had this drawing and i was sort of writing it. strange drawing:)
bubl