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You Say...crit is fine

Postby spot » Thu Dec 02, 2004 10:19 pm

This is another one by my daughter....


You say you’ll call
but you never do.
You say you’ll be there
but you never are.
When I need you most
I can’t find you.
You get annoyed
when I bring it up.
You ask if it matters
like you don’t care.
Well baby it matters
if only to me.

MET 11/04

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