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Black and yellow winged
monarch on the milkweed bloom,
beauty in being.
monarch on the milkweed bloom,
beauty in being.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...
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Like ghostly soldiers
looming through the snow-filled air
tall pines guard the land.
looming through the snow-filled air
tall pines guard the land.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...
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Avenue of palms
susserating in the wind
whisper of summer.
susserating in the wind
whisper of summer.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...
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Blossom flaunts nectar.
Bright wings will ever answer
the eternal call.
Bright wings will ever answer
the eternal call.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...
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Scattered on the snow
leaves and pine branches wither
victims of the storm.
leaves and pine branches wither
victims of the storm.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...
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Lilacs
Purple green sweet smells
Pleasant memory, childhood springs
Lost in the moment
Purple green sweet smells
Pleasant memory, childhood springs
Lost in the moment
"Space is deep, man is small, and time is his relentless enemy" L. Ron Hubbard
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"It's hard to dance when the floor keeps moving"...
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"It's hard to dance when the floor keeps moving"...
Hey, cheese, long time no see! Glad you popped in. I think lilacs were part of childhood for many of us. Still love them.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...
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Been shopping for greeting cards, Pengy?
Been shopping for greeting cards, Pengy?

"Throughout history, Truth and Love have always won." - M. Ghandi
"Truth and Love often get the crap kicked out of them along the way." -D. Mudge
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"Truth and Love often get the crap kicked out of them along the way." -D. Mudge
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www.imaginationtogo.com
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Thanks Mlou, good to see you too!
Wet, wet, drippy day
Heavy wet clouds hang low
Soaking land and mood
Wet, wet, drippy day
Heavy wet clouds hang low
Soaking land and mood
"Space is deep, man is small, and time is his relentless enemy" L. Ron Hubbard
http://www.ilovecheese.com/
"It's hard to dance when the floor keeps moving"...
http://www.ilovecheese.com/
"It's hard to dance when the floor keeps moving"...
Always remember
life-giving rains must bless the land
so nature may smile.

life-giving rains must bless the land
so nature may smile.

nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...
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True that about the rains Mlou. But all plants need a kiss from the sun every now and again, as well do most of us humans...
"Space is deep, man is small, and time is his relentless enemy" L. Ron Hubbard
http://www.ilovecheese.com/
"It's hard to dance when the floor keeps moving"...
http://www.ilovecheese.com/
"It's hard to dance when the floor keeps moving"...
Yes but not QUITE as much as weve had here in New England this last week. Only twice in 22 years have I had water come in downstairs. This was one of the two. What a mess! That's what I get for saying something nice about the rain. 

nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...
GINGERBREAD MAN by Mary Lou Healy at Amazon.com http://www.publishamerica.com/shopping/ ... ogid=16658 at Publish America
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Sunset paradise,
palms whispering to ocean...
Do you remember?
Hey, PW, twinsies today!
palms whispering to ocean...
Do you remember?
Hey, PW, twinsies today!

nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...
GINGERBREAD MAN by Mary Lou Healy at Amazon.com http://www.publishamerica.com/shopping/ ... ogid=16658 at Publish America
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From thorns and prickles
triumphant beauty blossoms
to gladden our hearts.
triumphant beauty blossoms
to gladden our hearts.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...
GINGERBREAD MAN by Mary Lou Healy at Amazon.com http://www.publishamerica.com/shopping/ ... ogid=16658 at Publish America
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At rain's magic touch
cactus burst into blossom...
gems of the desert.
cactus burst into blossom...
gems of the desert.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...
GINGERBREAD MAN by Mary Lou Healy at Amazon.com http://www.publishamerica.com/shopping/ ... ogid=16658 at Publish America
GINGERBREAD MAN by Mary Lou Healy at Amazon.com http://www.publishamerica.com/shopping/ ... ogid=16658 at Publish America
On the twilight veldt
one twisted tree stands alone
defying darkness.
one twisted tree stands alone
defying darkness.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...
GINGERBREAD MAN by Mary Lou Healy at Amazon.com http://www.publishamerica.com/shopping/ ... ogid=16658 at Publish America
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I think of you, all the time...
I see your face everywhere...
It's your voice ringing in my ear always,
Be it in the whispering wind,
Or in the cry of the seagull
As he dives and skims off the sea,
In the ripples made on the sand by the waves,
Or the subtle shades of light and dark,
That finds its place in my wayward heart!
Vicky Roach
I see your face everywhere...
It's your voice ringing in my ear always,
Be it in the whispering wind,
Or in the cry of the seagull
As he dives and skims off the sea,
In the ripples made on the sand by the waves,
Or the subtle shades of light and dark,
That finds its place in my wayward heart!
Vicky Roach
Hi, priyanthi...welcome to WordTrip. Thoughtful poem with nice images, even if it's not a haiku.
Check back in this thread and you'll see that a haiku (usually about nature) runs in 3 lines, with syllables mostly 5-7-5. Try one, they're fun.
You can post your poems in a new post, if you like. And if you'd like comments, you usually indicate that in your post. Enjoy!

You can post your poems in a new post, if you like. And if you'd like comments, you usually indicate that in your post. Enjoy!
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...
GINGERBREAD MAN by Mary Lou Healy at Amazon.com http://www.publishamerica.com/shopping/ ... ogid=16658 at Publish America
GINGERBREAD MAN by Mary Lou Healy at Amazon.com http://www.publishamerica.com/shopping/ ... ogid=16658 at Publish America
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