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Postby JadedIvory » Sun Sep 26, 2004 12:05 am

The morning dew prompts a memory
Of you and all of your delight
Your praise and faults collide
Oh what I experienced last night

Your passion oozes from the words you speak
And your life is an underworld unknown to me
All the more reason to love you
And to open my eyes with glee

Though these feelings arrise from my heart
Yours is in another place
And I will now walk away in a solemn daze
My smile, my stride full of grace

Love is a fifthy emotion
Though I long for it in these young times
And when it attempts to be again
I will welcome it with my rhymes
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