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I am twin hills of sand - crit OK

Postby sarjane » Sun Aug 08, 2004 9:42 pm

I am twin hills of sand

I am twin hills of sand,
Tinged with warmth,
Rosy-white in morning’s first light.

I am an oasis shifting slowly,
Rolling and rolling,
Lifting sun and raising skies.

I am dissolving above
From long breaths of wind
That trek across my skin.

They come on soft pads,
Walking ways up my slopes,
Leaving faint trails of soap.

Copyright 2004 s balderas
all lines, poems © S. Balderas

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