P.I.M. - POETRY IN MOTION

LilacWine · Postby **LilacWine** » Mon Jul 10, 2006 7:44 am

Commas

pausing dimples,
hooks holding breath,
dipping elbows to
crook the next break,
posed resistance

Mlou · Postby **Mlou** » Mon Jul 10, 2006 12:45 pm

Nice original take on the words! We only used two words in common today.

LilacWine · Postby **LilacWine** » Tue Jul 11, 2006 3:17 pm

On a northern run,
we crossed the border,
our last sight, the rain,
beyond it was nothing.

Mlou · Postby **Mlou** » Wed Jul 12, 2006 8:45 am

Keep going. About 50 reruns left before you give it up.

LilacWine · Postby **LilacWine** » Wed Jul 12, 2006 10:23 am

Indian Summer

Crimson sunrise
Spun-gold sky
Shimmering grain
Harvest of paint-brushed leaves
A window to winter

Mlou · Postby **Mlou** » Wed Jul 12, 2006 1:09 pm

Evocative picture. Nice words to work with today, huh?

LilacWine · Postby **LilacWine** » Wed Jul 12, 2006 3:32 pm

Better than usual, but I would still like more fat, juicy verbs in the mix.

Mlou · Postby **Mlou** » Wed Jul 12, 2006 4:22 pm

Yeah, and if they'd substitute them for delicious, desire & chortle!

pengwenn · Postby **pengwenn** » Fri Jul 21, 2006 1:44 pm

the clouds
make an end
to the rapture
of immortal warmth

Mlou · Postby **Mlou** » Fri Jul 21, 2006 6:55 pm

Glad you stopped in!

LilacWine · Postby **LilacWine** » Sat Jul 22, 2006 6:13 pm

Love's golden pen lingers
on the gilded page of time,
writing sonnets
with new found words.

Mlou · Postby **Mlou** » Sun Jul 23, 2006 1:15 pm

You write THE sonnets. :-D

LilacWine · Postby **LilacWine** » Sun Jul 23, 2006 8:54 pm

Married in Vain

The uxorious husband
and his self-absorbed wife
found on the bottom
of Shadow Lake.

Mlou · Postby **Mlou** » Mon Jul 24, 2006 12:19 pm

Yikes! I love a mystery! (Anyone remember that old radio program? Of course not. You babies don't even remember radio, period. :-D

)

pengwenn · Postby **pengwenn** » Mon Jul 24, 2006 1:40 pm

I will steal
the silence
in my focused
compulsion
to escape in books

Mlou · Postby **Mlou** » Mon Jul 24, 2006 6:11 pm

Nicely done!

LilacWine · Postby **LilacWine** » Mon Jul 24, 2006 9:40 pm

Claustrophobic

Pin-striped suits and paisley ties
squeezed into neat rows,
like supermarket racks and
stacked with neon screams.

LilacWine · Postby **LilacWine** » Tue Jul 25, 2006 7:25 am

My foolish ship
was burdened by
accepted existence;
its futile rising
exposed as a dream,
misleading the explorer.

LilacWine · Postby **LilacWine** » Wed Jul 26, 2006 12:07 pm

Sadistic Winter

Nature’s tyrant whose wail
and piercing sting
makes our cry become frail:
Death is thus King.

pengwenn · Postby **pengwenn** » Wed Jul 26, 2006 5:42 pm

woe is the heaven
that cries the
death of spring

LilacWine · Postby **LilacWine** » Thu Jul 27, 2006 8:34 am

The Northern sun,
on a never-ending run,
crossed heaven’s curves,
awakening insane nerves.

purty_trash · Postby **purty_trash** » Thu Jul 27, 2006 11:19 am

great work poets, here's my regular pat on the back. Keep it up! :-D

LilacWine · Postby **LilacWine** » Thu Jul 27, 2006 1:06 pm

Thanks for the pat on the back. Could you throw money instead?

Mlou · Postby **Mlou** » Thu Jul 27, 2006 6:08 pm

And you know what they can do with THAT list!! WHAT is their fixation with it????

LilacWine · Postby **LilacWine** » Fri Jul 28, 2006 11:58 am

Only certain
heart-faced flowers
witnessed the vibrations
made by breeze whispers
through the dormant paths