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First Love, please crit

Postby xcheck24 » Sat Jun 05, 2004 8:48 pm

Memories of First Love

Dear Old Flame,
Where has your life landed you?
Did that far off land steal you away?
Or did you come back home?
Or maybe a new land claims you?
Do you ever think of me?
Do you remember our youthful love
That was torn by the real world?
Is there someone new
that has erased me from your heart?
I think of you
When hear a song on the radio
Or I read old verses.
Do they stir memories of me for you too?
Do you remember the sweet kisses we shared
While sitting in the park?
Or sneaking private time
behind our parents back?
My memories are so pure.
Are they for you too?
Behind the Press
There's always a bloody ghost.

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