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Postby Mlou » Tue Jul 18, 2006 10:28 am

Hey, Lilac, that sounds like a good title for a short story. How about it?
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...


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Postby Mlou » Fri Jul 21, 2006 10:46 am

RUNES
Etched in sand
by the sea-wind's dance,
immortal legends
that we cannot read.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...





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Postby Mlou » Sat Jul 22, 2006 9:30 am

(With apologies to u-no-hoo)

I WRITE SONGS
Sonnets burning within
speaking of passions,
golden days and memories
ever green.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...





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Postby LilacWine » Sat Jul 22, 2006 6:08 pm

You write songs-- He writes THE songs.....
"I write entirely to find out what I'm thinking, what I'm looking at, what I see and what it means. What I want and what I fear." -- Joan Didion (1934 - )

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Postby Mlou » Sun Jul 23, 2006 11:39 am

Yeah, I know but "the" wasn't within my word limit. :)
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Postby Mlou » Sun Jul 23, 2006 1:17 pm

With his pastels
the artist drapes flesh
like a lover and presents it
soft, vulnerable and real.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...





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Postby Mlou » Mon Jul 24, 2006 4:31 pm

Interesting words today. Squeezed 2 out of it.

SUBWAY
Cloistered in inner silence,
with neon thoughts
spilling out like wordless screams,
I wait for release.

BORED,
I escape in thoughts of
moths in paisley suits and
faces stacked like books,
like totem poles.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...





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Postby pengwenn » Mon Jul 24, 2006 4:56 pm

I started pulling out words and grouping them together in three piles based on ideas that occured to me. But since I'm at work I only had time to fiddle out one.
Is this my reality or yours?
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Postby Mlou » Wed Jul 26, 2006 6:11 pm

PLEA
Heal me, beloved Spring,
who piercing Winter's shield,
comes smiling,
changing death to life.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...





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Postby LilacWine » Wed Jul 26, 2006 7:29 pm

lol twins again. :D
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Postby purty_trash » Thu Jul 27, 2006 11:25 am

Good one, Mlou. :-D
Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing.
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Postby Mlou » Fri Jul 28, 2006 3:35 pm

HEART MAGIC
I believe in dreams.
With a child's naivete, I hear
angel voices in the wind.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...





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Postby LilacWine » Fri Jul 28, 2006 3:51 pm

Wind appears to be a wonderful communication device. :)
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Postby Mlou » Fri Jul 28, 2006 6:38 pm

Yes, especially among windbags! :-D
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Postby Mlou » Sat Jul 29, 2006 1:13 pm

SIMPLICITY
I ask no complicated questions
of life. I am ever
turning back to basic things
and a way worth living.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...





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Postby LilacWine » Sat Jul 29, 2006 1:51 pm

Interesting list today, lots of verbs for once and I barely touched them. :oops:

Good job.
"I write entirely to find out what I'm thinking, what I'm looking at, what I see and what it means. What I want and what I fear." -- Joan Didion (1934 - )



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Postby Mlou » Sun Jul 30, 2006 5:05 pm

BRIGHT RHAPSODY
Resplendent in glowing raiment,
iris lift into the light,
an iridescent composition
of thine hand.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...





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Postby LilacWine » Sun Jul 30, 2006 8:38 pm

Irises are one of my favorites. I like any kind of purple flower actually. :)
"I write entirely to find out what I'm thinking, what I'm looking at, what I see and what it means. What I want and what I fear." -- Joan Didion (1934 - )



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Postby Mlou » Mon Jul 31, 2006 8:19 am

lilacs are my favorites...until the iris bloom...until the roses open...until...you get the picture. :-D

My thoughts are meteors,
mystic stars of the mind,
visions to light the darkness
and propel me on.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...





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Postby LilacWine » Mon Jul 31, 2006 12:05 pm

Very forceful picture. :)
"I write entirely to find out what I'm thinking, what I'm looking at, what I see and what it means. What I want and what I fear." -- Joan Didion (1934 - )



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Postby Mlou » Wed Aug 02, 2006 1:10 pm

RESPITE
Like a held breath released,
rain strikes and a white wind arising
stirs the cooled air.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...





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Postby LilacWine » Wed Aug 02, 2006 2:55 pm

You made a storm! I could only wallow in the heat. :(
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Postby Mlou » Thu Aug 03, 2006 5:35 pm

I went over today because I liked the words.

LEAVING PARADISE
In the benign streets
I walked the purple dark,
palms redolent of stolen
apricots and bread
and chose a hundred things
to remember it by.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...





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Postby LilacWine » Thu Aug 03, 2006 6:49 pm

I could have gone on today if not limited to the twenty words. ah well.
"I write entirely to find out what I'm thinking, what I'm looking at, what I see and what it means. What I want and what I fear." -- Joan Didion (1934 - )



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Postby Mlou » Fri Aug 04, 2006 9:37 am

O, to be a white bird
over the storm-flecked sea
calling to dawn,
turning in freedom and light.
nothing is ever simply Yes or No. There's always a But...





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