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by mslover
Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:22 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - July 13, 2010
Replies: 23
Views: 15211

better mlou??? :P
by mslover
Tue Jul 13, 2010 2:01 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - July 13, 2010
Replies: 23
Views: 15211

POETRY CHALLENGE - July 13, 2010

Please work on last week's as well! Okay...let's try the following: 1) Try this: ABC - A poem that has five lines that create a mood, picture, or feeling. Lines 1 through 4 are made up of words, phrases or clauses while the first word of each line is in alphabetical order. Line 5 is one sentence lon...
by mslover
Tue Jul 13, 2010 1:16 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: TUESDAY POETRY CHALLENGE July 6, 2010
Replies: 19
Views: 12470

missing childhood i miss my crayons using my 8 fat colors, the innocence of purple hair and yellow sky, limiting my choices yet expanding my universe. it's complicated now, choosing between cerulean or cornflower, burnt sienna or sepia, and coloring outside the lines causes chaos to my orderly life.
by mslover
Fri Jul 09, 2010 10:34 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: TUESDAY POETRY CHALLENGE July 6, 2010
Replies: 19
Views: 12470

i tried three times...failing miserably to complete a thought long enough to write a poem. sigh... i'll try again tomorrow.
by mslover
Fri Jul 02, 2010 10:08 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: TUESDAY POETRY CHALLENGE 6-29-10
Replies: 12
Views: 8687

finally free we figure on a life of obscurity we blend in, no style, no individuality yoked and resigned and mute subjected to the slow plodding of day by day existence, living for tomorrow longing for release, longing for passion. we must find a way, must break free, loosen the chains, drop them t...
by mslover
Wed Jun 30, 2010 2:53 pm
Forum: Personal Blogs
Topic: Pengwenn's hemorrhagging money
Replies: 494
Views: 267053

heehee... that is AWESOME! time to get some maracas! :D
by mslover
Wed Jun 30, 2010 2:09 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Mudge's Poetry Dump
Replies: 339
Views: 195553

the way it goes it almost seems it should be the opposite of undefiled - since you are fighting your way to heaven? I get up every morning just to wade through all this sh!t I'm too far gone to make it but I'm just too dumb to quit; I fight my way to heaven, unredeemed and undefiled ... maybe tainte...
by mslover
Fri Jun 25, 2010 12:16 pm
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: mslover's poetry junkyard
Replies: 99
Views: 65954

well, ummm.... since i don't hold myself out to be edumacated or intelligent in any respect, i guess i will pass on the using them. :roll:
by mslover
Fri Jun 25, 2010 12:02 pm
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: mslover's poetry junkyard
Replies: 99
Views: 65954

ummm... so does this mean i should or shouldn't use semicolons? :D
by mslover
Mon Jun 21, 2010 3:46 pm
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: mslover's poetry junkyard
Replies: 99
Views: 65954

yes just for you. as to the squiggles but no question marks... i'm not sure why but question marks in poetry bug me. i suppose i could use a semicolon instead of the squiggles.

and yes, that would tighten up the last bit if i could tighten up my fading into the background... i'll ponder on it.
by mslover
Mon Jun 21, 2010 3:42 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: TUESDAY POETRY CHALLENGE 6-15/22...a little late :)
Replies: 16
Views: 10455

much better... i tripped over that line but knew what i wanted it to SAY... just not how to say it. :D
by mslover
Mon Jun 21, 2010 3:34 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: TUESDAY POETRY CHALLENGE 6-15/22...a little late :)
Replies: 16
Views: 10455

soulspeak
we are lovers,
though we have not embraced.
each knows well the other's thoughts
though we have not spoken.
we speak without speech,
love without touch,
souls entwined
we are complete.
by mslover
Mon Jun 21, 2010 3:33 pm
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: mslover's poetry junkyard
Replies: 99
Views: 65954

sometimes i wonder what is the point of giving them titles? though sometimes i just don't know what to call them and/or since this is my junkyard they are typically not done or need a lot of tweaking. for you, mlou, i will see what i can do.
by mslover
Mon Jun 21, 2010 1:11 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: A Promise for the Hard Times - Crits and Comments Sought
Replies: 17
Views: 7951

LOL... mae - i changed the third stanza to say "i will" instead of "I'll" - not blunt enough? i had to go edit my crit because initially i didn't read your line wherein you state about the dark and cold repeated. The other thing that sort of caught me off guard was the number of lines in the stanzas...
by mslover
Mon Jun 21, 2010 1:08 pm
Forum: Personal Blogs
Topic: Pengwenn's hemorrhagging money
Replies: 494
Views: 267053

pengwenn wrote:When I get criticized for being moody, I might very well have a good reason to feel that way.


Absolutely... sorry to hear about the latest issue. you can be moody all you like!
by mslover
Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:55 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: TUESDAY POETRY CHALLENGE 6-15/22...a little late :)
Replies: 16
Views: 10455

mlou... thank you for keeping this up - it's been pretty dead around here but having these posted at least periodically gets me going so i, for one, appreciate it.
by mslover
Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:24 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: A Promise for the Hard Times - Crits and Comments Sought
Replies: 17
Views: 7951

Hey mae... i like contractions sometimes but then sometimes it feels they weaken the poem in certain places. for example, the third stanza (which i really, really like): "When those near you only shout and quiet cannot be found, I will whisper your name. " take it with a grain of salt... you know i ...
by mslover
Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:19 pm
Forum: Personal Blogs
Topic: Pengwenn's hemorrhagging money
Replies: 494
Views: 267053

i see you pop up online... seems i'm ALWAYS online now. LOL
by mslover
Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:18 pm
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: mslover's poetry junkyard
Replies: 99
Views: 65954

fade
need i beg,
for a single touch,
a caress of your hand
a kiss from your lips;
need i plead,
for affectionate looks
a special smile
a warm embrace;
or shall i instead
just fade away.
by mslover
Thu Jun 10, 2010 12:10 pm
Forum: Personal Blogs
Topic: Pengwenn's hemorrhagging money
Replies: 494
Views: 267053

well now i'm going to have to write one just for you. :D

and i added you to my xbox online last night.
by mslover
Thu Jun 10, 2010 12:05 pm
Forum: Personal Blogs
Topic: xcheck's sin bin
Replies: 1290
Views: 425493

Not as much as what will be devoted to Phillies bashing. okay again x.. i have to ask... what is it that everyone seems to find so great about bashing the phillies? i don't get it. they are a good group of guys and they play well (or is that the problem?) LOL been a while... hope you are well!
by mslover
Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:22 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: TUESDAY POETRY CHALLENGE 5-11-10 & 5-18-10
Replies: 10
Views: 6776

i like this! now... more poetry please!
by mslover
Wed Jun 09, 2010 12:59 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: TUESDAY POETRY CHALLENGE 5/25/10 & 06/01/2010
Replies: 6
Views: 5618

Very tranquil appealing poem, ms. I have just one thought...the closing line seems a little awkward. I like the thought of the vision haunting and begging for your attention, yet is implore ever used as a noun? Ummmm no... hence the reason i don't do rhyme well. any ideas on how to make implore ver...
by mslover
Fri Jun 04, 2010 3:44 pm
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: mslover's poetry junkyard
Replies: 99
Views: 65954

be that as it may...

appearing in my
fragmented dreams,
(your smile, your touch)
you linger teasingly
taunting me,
disappearing completely
confronted by daylight.
by mslover
Fri Jun 04, 2010 3:34 pm
Forum: Personal Blogs
Topic: Pengwenn's hemorrhagging money
Replies: 494
Views: 267053

and what pray tell would give you the idea that i have any seduction advice??? :shock:

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