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by purty_trash
Tue Sep 27, 2005 7:37 pm
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: Trash's Paper Dump Box
Replies: 13
Views: 10112

Sci- fi novel progress:

Gotta do research about Entanglement theory. I feel it holds the perfect twist to the plot. Will do that in one of the days.
by purty_trash
Tue Sep 27, 2005 1:23 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Haiku for me, Haiku for you
Replies: 2317
Views: 1084761

Moon in the night sky,
Lonely, lovely, single eye,
Hums her song of life.
by purty_trash
Tue Sep 27, 2005 12:09 am
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: Trash's Paper Dump Box
Replies: 13
Views: 10112

Sci - fi novel: Just learned about the multiverse aspect of quantum theory and the non - flowing view of time. it collides with my own plot a bit so i'll have to work round it. Quantum theory will require much more research before i can safely use it in the novel. Also gotta search Free Unified theo...
by purty_trash
Tue Sep 27, 2005 12:04 am
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: Trash's Paper Dump Box
Replies: 13
Views: 10112

well Del if you are going for Stephen Hawkins then ask for the illustrated version of 'A Brief History Of Time'. Supplement it with 'Stephen Hwakins - A Life In Science' and I think you will be able to grasp it sufficiently. But I must add that you must have some prelimenary knowledge about diffract...
by purty_trash
Mon Sep 26, 2005 9:25 pm
Forum: The Writer's Life - Techniques, Characterization, Writing Ideas, & More
Topic: Your Writing Space...
Replies: 8
Views: 5427

hi scarecrow, i don't have a desk or a proper table.
when i'm at home, it is just my laptop and my enduring lap
when i'm at college it is the cyber cafe.(the college, of course doesn't allow this on their computer.)
by purty_trash
Mon Sep 26, 2005 9:11 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Haiku for me, Haiku for you
Replies: 2317
Views: 1084761

Hmmm Mlou,
something to chew upon. i'll keep it in mind. Thanx for the capsule lesson. :)
by purty_trash
Mon Sep 26, 2005 4:18 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Haiku for me, Haiku for you
Replies: 2317
Views: 1084761

thanx lum is it required that i go over and see the daily picture? i am not comfortable with boundations. I let my spirit wander, Over the Mountains, under the sea, And what's mine, came back. golly, this is so much fun. Whee! :-D er... what are syllables. :( ? sorry, i'm totally naive when it comes...
by purty_trash
Mon Sep 26, 2005 4:06 pm
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: Trash's Paper Dump Box
Replies: 13
Views: 10112

hi Del. i've actually got the theme clear in my head. i'm still to make notes and all. i've went through 'a brief history of time' by stephen hawkins and 'stephen hawkins - a life in science'. the latter one is a supplement to the former and clears up the subject a bit more. i'm planning to use some...
by purty_trash
Mon Sep 26, 2005 3:01 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Haiku for me, Haiku for you
Replies: 2317
Views: 1084761

er... i haven't tried Haiku yet. it looks like a lot of fun. tell me if i deviate from the definition or anything else.

A raindrop jumps,
from skies above, as thunders clap,
Falling to lift my soul.
by purty_trash
Mon Sep 26, 2005 2:48 pm
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: Trash's Paper Dump Box
Replies: 13
Views: 10112

thanx Mlou but I have never been able to will myself to write a poem. i mean it just happens. there comes a day when i feel that i must write something. Monsoon is in its full bloom here in India and after such scorching summers they're a relief. i was very excited with the first rain ( u know the k...
by purty_trash
Mon Sep 26, 2005 1:35 am
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: Trash's Paper Dump Box
Replies: 13
Views: 10112

Trash's Paper Dump Box

I am planning to write a novel. I hope it is a sci-fi one (althouh i intend it to be one but i fear it might turn out to be a comedy). I'll keep posting chapters here so that i feel good when i look at them. I know that I'll need some serious research which might take a long while. I'll keep jugglin...
by purty_trash
Mon Jul 18, 2005 6:47 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: WHO CRIES FOR VEEJU UNKNOWN <crit welcome>
Replies: 5
Views: 3036

hmmm. u've given me a few nice points to think bout, x. i'll try and improve next time. :-D
by purty_trash
Sun Jul 17, 2005 5:46 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: WHO CRIES FOR VEEJU UNKNOWN <crit welcome>
Replies: 5
Views: 3036

thanx guyz Mlou all my sentence in the 2nd stanza are trying to convey double meaning. the man who stood 6ft and more: his presence was intimidating...er...emotionally. i hope u understand. in whose voice could sink the deepest seas: not only was his voice deep but also what he spoke was interesting...
by purty_trash
Sat Jul 16, 2005 9:18 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: WHO CRIES FOR VEEJU UNKNOWN <crit welcome>
Replies: 5
Views: 3036

WHO CRIES FOR VEEJU UNKNOWN <crit welcome>

Quick refrence dictionary: Tapri = a cheap roadside stall which sells snacks, tea, cigarettes and small items. <vernacular> Samosas and kachauri= popular Indian snacks. The idea for the poem took me by throat the night before and even though i have my xams and all coming up, i had to write it down. ...
by purty_trash
Fri May 27, 2005 6:11 am
Forum: Member Introductions
Topic: Hello Everyone!
Replies: 26
Views: 17879

welcome Ben. :-D
by purty_trash
Mon May 16, 2005 1:39 am
Forum: Picture Prompts
Topic: PP - The Lone Traveler
Replies: 33
Views: 36752

Hey i'm totally inspired by u gyz looks like i'll post something too. BTW can u post replies only on mondays or anytime cuz i'll take some time doin it. :roll:
by purty_trash
Wed May 11, 2005 2:37 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Mooning away: crit welcome
Replies: 8
Views: 6160

oh my god! hey charles i d'dn't kno that but now i see ur point. :rofl: Gosh it sounds so damn funny. i think i won't change the poem at all but i'll run it in some humourous poems contest :-k . i think it should easily qualify. :wink:
by purty_trash
Mon May 09, 2005 11:25 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Stagnating Rivers <poem> : crits wanted
Replies: 6
Views: 3889

hey thanx everybody. actually i'm surprised cuz when i wrote this poem i just let the words flow. rhyming was not in my mind but it came with the words used so that should explain the inconsistancy. when i say wipe it away, you can do i mean to let the person involved forget the misery. and also i m...
by purty_trash
Mon May 09, 2005 11:16 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Mooning away: crit welcome
Replies: 8
Views: 6160

okay guys, thanx fer ur comments. Actually this expresses my feelings of crush over this beautiful girl whose face reminds me of the "magical moon'. mooning is used to describe the unique motion of the moon in the sky i.e. it can float aimlessly over the night sky. and definitely i am always taken a...
by purty_trash
Mon May 09, 2005 7:31 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Mooning away: crit welcome
Replies: 8
Views: 6160

Mooning away: crit welcome

Mooning away, floating in this moonless night. Mooning away, you always fly so high. Blue, white and the magical moon: you're The suns and the sunshine, The stars in the dark night, The infinitely green fields, The blurr of the rainbow colors; You're the life which always moons On this moonless nigh...
by purty_trash
Mon May 09, 2005 7:05 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: artifice (crit)
Replies: 3
Views: 2819

wow! great stuff hanna! i think u're totally amazing. and , at the risk of repeating milou- the way your poem glides into the realms of foggy understandings, i think thats what a poem is all about.
by purty_trash
Mon May 09, 2005 6:52 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: The End (crit and comments welcome!)
Replies: 3
Views: 3075

i think it needs to have more depth. the idea was fantastic but you needed depth so that the reader lingers on your ideas. see, i think when you've got some feelings that you think about deeply you must force the reader to think that way too. if u use more vague sentences and also more comparisons- ...
by purty_trash
Mon May 09, 2005 6:25 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Stagnating Rivers <poem> : crits wanted
Replies: 6
Views: 3889

Stagnating Rivers <poem> : crits wanted

Stagnating Rivers: its based on emotional turmoil of a woman after her last fight with her spouse( after which things would head off for divorce) Hard bargain, so hard to swallow, You try to take it in you But too much would be too much pain Can't take it out, it can stir the dust around And would h...
by purty_trash
Mon May 09, 2005 6:04 pm
Forum: Member Introductions
Topic: purty_trash Introduction
Replies: 8
Views: 6325

Thanx Mudge i'll get started right away! :D
by purty_trash
Mon May 09, 2005 5:51 am
Forum: Member Introductions
Topic: purty_trash Introduction
Replies: 8
Views: 6325

Hi ppl. this is my first time on any such site (ya know what i mean). I'm interested in writing short stories, poems and crap- to be seen by the world. I don't really give a damn 'bout money but i'd really like the ppl to give a critical review or somethin of that sort on my crap. if u kno anythin t...

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