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by JadedIvory
Mon Nov 29, 2004 9:34 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Goodbye Love (Crit Appreciated)
Replies: 1
Views: 1395

Goodbye Love (Crit Appreciated)

I am trying a new style of poetry-villanelle. I am starting with this simple poem. If anyone knows anything about this particular style, I would like to know whether or not I am using it correctly. Thanks. Goodbye Love With each passing day My heart darkens like night And a part of you drifts away O...
by JadedIvory
Sat Nov 27, 2004 12:56 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Another Heartbreak (Crit Ok)
Replies: 1
Views: 1338

Another Heartbreak (Crit Ok)

You are the wind that blew in my face At an awkward time of mourning And shall I see you again I will give you fair warning Each night I lie in bed And dream dreadful desires I awake with realization Of my unattained fires My life a pathetic wilderness That you will be sucked into So drive you away ...
by JadedIvory
Sun Sep 26, 2004 12:05 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Untitled (Crit OK)
Replies: 0
Views: 1293

Untitled (Crit OK)

The morning dew prompts a memory Of you and all of your delight Your praise and faults collide Oh what I experienced last night Your passion oozes from the words you speak And your life is an underworld unknown to me All the more reason to love you And to open my eyes with glee Though these feelings...
by JadedIvory
Mon Sep 20, 2004 12:05 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: The Stars are out Tonight (Crit OK)
Replies: 0
Views: 1241

The Stars are out Tonight (Crit OK)

The Stars are out Tonight The stars are out tonight Their faces beam with furious delight Though the dark may ignite a fright I wish I may I wish I might These beauties I wish I could share With someone to hold with care My love life seeming bare I have stifled it with despair Most people to not see...
by JadedIvory
Sat Sep 18, 2004 12:59 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Wind's Seduction, Crit OK
Replies: 1
Views: 1236

Wind's Seduction, Crit OK

Wind's Seduction A sensation builds As it runs it's waves through my hair My eyelids flutter as it sweeps softly across them Lips relax, letting it kiss me It kisses down my neck Making me fall, forget Tickling down my chest Moving up to my shoulders Massaging every muscle My body gets light Leaning...
by JadedIvory
Sat Sep 18, 2004 12:26 am
Forum: Writer's Research - Because it's important to know your subject!
Topic: Your Specialties?
Replies: 153
Views: 77692

You know...I knew you would end up catching me! I'm...gathering...information for it...yeah. Somehow what everyone specializes in has something to do with my paper...
by JadedIvory
Sat Sep 18, 2004 12:23 am
Forum: Writer's Research - Because it's important to know your subject!
Topic: Your Specialties?
Replies: 153
Views: 77692

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by JadedIvory
Fri Sep 17, 2004 3:52 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: Poetry Challenge for Sept. 15, '04
Replies: 38
Views: 20275

This poem is for the second challenege. It is a little off topic and a bit scattered, for I wrote it in....yeah...a minute. It will become something better soon but I had to, at least, get my ideas out. Ivan's Escape He runs through the south With the sack under his arm Parched at the mouth Full of ...

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