Ashes...Ashes...we all fall down. Please make these memory's leave, Please make these memory's go I forgot them so they would not show but now when I close my eyes its all I see these demons are coming back...running back. And these lies I've told will not hold me in the end. This lie I am will dest...

Ok, please tell me what you think. I need all the help I can get. Thanks. Veritas I must not fear the truth Doubts filled me, Obsessed with knowing. You fooled me. Now can I trust you? Puzzled, fooled, I saw the ghost of you. You were my personal protection, But now I’m stuck under the cover, Of thi...

I edited it a bit, but I'm now moving on to something else. This is not one of my better poems, that’s why I posted it, I am trying to get all of my old half done work DONE. Thanks I really need this kind of crits. As We Sleep Tonight Trying to find out why again, These thoughts are useless in my mi...

Hi all I have not been here in a wile so please let me know what you think. As We Sleep Tonight Trying to find out why again, These thoughts are useless in my mind, Turned into sand again Bad ways to wash it all away. We are never going to choose again We can never change the past Blinded by our fea...

um, feeling a little persecuted, are we This was written for my dad more than anything. He's a hard-nosed right wing and anything that isn't Christian and Republican (and looks like it) is evil. well its is, if god says don't do it then it is evil there is no maybe. But about the Republican thing, ...

I like it, great I love the way you wrote it.

This looked interesting, so I thought I'd give it a try. Here are my attempts: Poker cards, money folding, betting, bluffing where your friends are your enemies broke One more try: Kittens soft, fluffy playing, purring, pooping what was I thinking? love. love the kittens one, my two cats had nine k...

Saw Crash, it was good. But did not see any other on the top ten list, not to sure about some of the other ones on the list, I could name some that should not be on there. Or should not even have been made but this is the world it’s getting more evil now. Humm... Anyway Crash that was good, I dont r...

Talking with Dragons got 55.4% I think I heard of a book called that already :? mine got 72.5% still not to sure about the title, but it did way better then the other titles I came up with, one was Alliey River(name of main character) and River (last name) I really dont like those names I trashed t...

wow this is a great site, thanks.
I've been looking for a good site like this.

I think I know what you mean, I like it. great

I am not being disrespectful, all I said was my opinon

I don’t think she should insult people who like to do that kind of stuff. How exactly is she insulting them? I don't really recall anything like that. What do kids not have a brain, they can decide what they want and need. That is whats wrong with some adults they don’t think that kids can think. I...

I really don’t agree with her, a story does not have to have a Messages, but some people like to think that they do, I have never wrote anything about hidden meanings or whatever but I don’t think she should insult people who like to do that kind of stuff. I think when people talk about the books Me...

I voted, for my important side character, her name is Keira she is saved by the main character. Then they become friends.

literary mainstream what is it??? I have an idea but not sure if its right. Oh ya I might enter The 74th Annual Writer's Digest Writing Competition (I posted this here so I don't have to make a new topic) there are 10 Categories! I dont know which categorie I should enter Short Story: Mainstream/Lit...

I have one, (Journal) that has all of my personal stuff, but most of the time I only write in it when I get mad so most of it is crap. Now I have thousands upon thousands of journals for my stories, ideas and poems, and small drawings .there everywhere. I even have a whole backpack full of them. :D

[/quote] IN THE PARK In the park where I dwell , I met a boy I loved so well . He came and stole my heart from me , and now this boy has set me free. He took a strange girl and set her on his knees , and told her things he never told me . I went home right to bed not a word to mother . Dad came home...

Actually, Aiden, I'm a copywriter. There IS money to be made in copywriting--someone once called it the second-most profitable form of writing, the first being ransom notes--but it's generally not something you can dabble in: the big money is at the top of the food chain. As to the course--if it li...

nightmare by:shannon fox I'm in my own world, the one I dreamed up inside my mind to get away from this world that’s doomed to die I’m all alone in this nightmare of a world. what do u all think???????? :crybaby: :-k Maybe instead of taking off the last bit just add a little bit more to it. I think...

What no I meant I dreamed up a world, to get away from the world that is evil (doomed to die)

Maybe I should take of the last bit

Albus Dumbledore was never proud or vain; he could find something to value in anyone however apparently insignificant or wretched and I believe that his early losses endowed him with great humanity Now, don?t underestimate your stamp licker as a player in this digestion process. Back in the day food...