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by goody2shoes
Mon May 25, 2009 11:08 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Ashes...Ashes...we all fall down (Please Crit)
Replies: 1
Views: 2141

Ashes...Ashes...we all fall down (Please Crit)

Ashes...Ashes...we all fall down. Please make these memory's leave, Please make these memory's go I forgot them so they would not show but now when I close my eyes its all I see these demons are coming back...running back. And these lies I've told will not hold me in the end. This lie I am will dest...
by goody2shoes
Wed Apr 15, 2009 4:45 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Veritas(Crits Please)
Replies: 2
Views: 2527

Veritas(Crits Please)

Ok, please tell me what you think. I need all the help I can get. Thanks. Veritas I must not fear the truth Doubts filled me, Obsessed with knowing. You fooled me. Now can I trust you? Puzzled, fooled, I saw the ghost of you. You were my personal protection, But now I’m stuck under the cover, Of thi...
by goody2shoes
Fri Apr 10, 2009 1:10 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: As We Sleep Tonight(crits please)
Replies: 7
Views: 5517

I edited it a bit, but I'm now moving on to something else. This is not one of my better poems, that’s why I posted it, I am trying to get all of my old half done work DONE. Thanks I really need this kind of crits. As We Sleep Tonight Trying to find out why again, These thoughts are useless in my mi...
by goody2shoes
Tue Apr 07, 2009 2:02 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: As We Sleep Tonight(crits please)
Replies: 7
Views: 5517

As We Sleep Tonight(crits please)

Hi all I have not been here in a wile so please let me know what you think. As We Sleep Tonight Trying to find out why again, These thoughts are useless in my mind, Turned into sand again Bad ways to wash it all away. We are never going to choose again We can never change the past Blinded by our fea...
by goody2shoes
Mon Jan 02, 2006 11:06 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: The Fallen
Replies: 5
Views: 4315

um, feeling a little persecuted, are we This was written for my dad more than anything. He's a hard-nosed right wing and anything that isn't Christian and Republican (and looks like it) is evil. well its is, if god says don't do it then it is evil there is no maybe. But about the Republican thing, ...
by goody2shoes
Mon Jan 02, 2006 9:38 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Tell the Stars
Replies: 9
Views: 6662

I like it, great I love the way you wrote it. :-D
by goody2shoes
Mon Jan 02, 2006 9:33 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: The Cinquain
Replies: 62
Views: 32548

This looked interesting, so I thought I'd give it a try. Here are my attempts: Poker cards, money folding, betting, bluffing where your friends are your enemies broke One more try: Kittens soft, fluffy playing, purring, pooping what was I thinking? love. love the kittens one, my two cats had nine k...
by goody2shoes
Mon Jan 02, 2006 9:17 pm
Forum: The Writer's Life - Techniques, Characterization, Writing Ideas, & More
Topic: Roger Ebert's Best Movies of 2005
Replies: 44
Views: 20139

Saw Crash, it was good. But did not see any other on the top ten list, not to sure about some of the other ones on the list, I could name some that should not be on there. Or should not even have been made but this is the world it’s getting more evil now. Humm... Anyway Crash that was good, I dont r...
by goody2shoes
Mon Jan 02, 2006 8:38 pm
Forum: The Writer's Life - Techniques, Characterization, Writing Ideas, & More
Topic: What's Your Title???
Replies: 40
Views: 23674

Talking with Dragons got 55.4% I think I heard of a book called that already :? mine got 72.5% still not to sure about the title, but it did way better then the other titles I came up with, one was Alliey River(name of main character) and River (last name) I really dont like those names I trashed t...
by goody2shoes
Fri Nov 04, 2005 11:34 pm
Forum: The Writer's Life - Techniques, Characterization, Writing Ideas, & More
Topic: Link for Sci-Fi Writers
Replies: 4
Views: 4177

wow this is a great site, thanks. :D :D
I've been looking for a good site like this. :yimhug:
by goody2shoes
Fri Nov 04, 2005 10:23 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: fallin from you
Replies: 5
Views: 3710

I think I know what you mean, I like it. great
by goody2shoes
Fri Aug 26, 2005 5:07 pm
Forum: The Writer's Life - Techniques, Characterization, Writing Ideas, & More
Topic: Ursula K. Le Guin: A Message about Messages
Replies: 32
Views: 20794

I am not being disrespectful, all I said was my opinon
by goody2shoes
Fri Aug 26, 2005 12:27 pm
Forum: The Writer's Life - Techniques, Characterization, Writing Ideas, & More
Topic: Ursula K. Le Guin: A Message about Messages
Replies: 32
Views: 20794

I don’t think she should insult people who like to do that kind of stuff. How exactly is she insulting them? I don't really recall anything like that. What do kids not have a brain, they can decide what they want and need. That is whats wrong with some adults they don’t think that kids can think. I...
by goody2shoes
Fri Aug 26, 2005 12:35 am
Forum: The Writer's Life - Techniques, Characterization, Writing Ideas, & More
Topic: Ursula K. Le Guin: A Message about Messages
Replies: 32
Views: 20794

I really don’t agree with her, a story does not have to have a Messages, but some people like to think that they do, I have never wrote anything about hidden meanings or whatever but I don’t think she should insult people who like to do that kind of stuff. I think when people talk about the books Me...
by goody2shoes
Sat Jul 23, 2005 12:03 pm
Forum: The Writer's Life - Techniques, Characterization, Writing Ideas, & More
Topic: Tell me all about the pieces of you...
Replies: 18
Views: 11024

I voted, for my important side character, her name is Keira she is saved by the main character. Then they become friends.
by goody2shoes
Tue Mar 15, 2005 6:10 pm
Forum: The Writer's Life - Techniques, Characterization, Writing Ideas, & More
Topic: "Literary" vs. Other Types of Fiction
Replies: 27
Views: 18890

literary mainstream what is it??? I have an idea but not sure if its right. Oh ya I might enter The 74th Annual Writer's Digest Writing Competition (I posted this here so I don't have to make a new topic) there are 10 Categories! I dont know which categorie I should enter Short Story: Mainstream/Lit...
by goody2shoes
Thu Mar 03, 2005 10:53 pm
Forum: The Writer's Life - Techniques, Characterization, Writing Ideas, & More
Topic: Jounals/Sketchbook
Replies: 48
Views: 26842

I have one, (Journal) that has all of my personal stuff, but most of the time I only write in it when I get mad so most of it is crap. Now I have thousands upon thousands of journals for my stories, ideas and poems, and small drawings .there everywhere. I even have a whole backpack full of them. :D
by goody2shoes
Mon Jan 24, 2005 9:03 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: please let me know what you think .
Replies: 4
Views: 3148

[/quote] IN THE PARK In the park where I dwell , I met a boy I loved so well . He came and stole my heart from me , and now this boy has set me free. He took a strange girl and set her on his knees , and told her things he never told me . I went home right to bed not a word to mother . Dad came home...
by goody2shoes
Sat Jan 01, 2005 1:45 am
Forum: Writer's Research - Because it's important to know your subject!
Topic: Copywriting
Replies: 19
Views: 10966

Actually, Aiden, I'm a copywriter. There IS money to be made in copywriting--someone once called it the second-most profitable form of writing, the first being ransom notes--but it's generally not something you can dabble in: the big money is at the top of the food chain. As to the course--if it li...
by goody2shoes
Tue Dec 21, 2004 9:06 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: honeymoon suites
Replies: 5
Views: 3038

Re: nightmare crit

nightmare by:shannon fox I'm in my own world, the one I dreamed up inside my mind to get away from this world that’s doomed to die I’m all alone in this nightmare of a world. what do u all think???????? :crybaby: :-k Maybe instead of taking off the last bit just add a little bit more to it. I think...
by goody2shoes
Tue Dec 21, 2004 8:36 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: honeymoon suites
Replies: 5
Views: 3038

What no I meant I dreamed up a world, to get away from the world that is evil (doomed to die)

Maybe I should take of the last bit
by goody2shoes
Tue Dec 21, 2004 2:53 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: honeymoon suites
Replies: 5
Views: 3038

honeymoon suites

Albus Dumbledore was never proud or vain; he could find something to value in anyone however apparently insignificant or wretched and I believe that his early losses endowed him with great humanity Now, don?t underestimate your stamp licker as a player in this digestion process. Back in the day food...

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