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by fiona
Fri Aug 08, 2008 11:14 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Choices: Thoughts on Love----please crit
Replies: 10
Views: 6419

I would define love as a healthy energy, with no regard of any classification whatsoever (is “whatsoever” correctly used here?). I would go as far as to saying that you can feel love for things. For instance, I’m trying to learn how to love writing and some little flowers and plants I’m growing. Don...
by fiona
Thu Aug 07, 2008 5:39 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Mourning
Replies: 9
Views: 6582

I wonder why nobody mentioned that. I don't think nobody noticed it.
We are supposed to be honest to each other in order to be helpful. Aren't we? :scratch:

Fiona :-P
by fiona
Thu Aug 07, 2008 7:32 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Mourning
Replies: 9
Views: 6582

Mae, needless to say, this is one of the worst things that may happen to a Western family. An irreversible tragedy indeed. However, as a humble reader the only element of poetry I see in your piece is the repetition of There's going to be a funeral today at the church down the road This is what I ho...
by fiona
Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:29 pm
Forum: The Coffee Shop
Topic: What are you listening to?
Replies: 931
Views: 440755

My husband's improvisations and my cat's sneeze. :-P
by fiona
Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:25 pm
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: Mlou's News
Replies: 863
Views: 331784

At least you have a past to remember and enough sound sense as to cope with present and value your people. :-P
by fiona
Sun Jul 20, 2008 11:30 am
Forum: Picture Prompts
Topic: Picture Perfect - Nice Doggie
Replies: 8
Views: 8241

What does "changling" mean?

I think this sofa is the same as the one hanging by ropes on the other Picture Perfect. It seems it has been born to suffer. :shock:
by fiona
Sat Jul 05, 2008 10:34 am
Forum: Picture Prompts
Topic: Picture Perfect - Ineffective Prohibition Ad
Replies: 24
Views: 13962

Fiona, honey, get a grip! d'oh! I'm getting used to being treated like this and I dare say that I would have liked to have known before how good it feels. :-P Nobody has a hint of 5 o'clock shadow. Photoshop. they look like they're fully corseted (something a man wouldn't be able to stand!), and th...
by fiona
Fri Jul 04, 2008 5:03 pm
Forum: Picture Prompts
Topic: Picture Perfect - Ineffective Prohibition Ad
Replies: 24
Views: 13962

Are you sure tthat they all aren't men just dressed in drag? I don't really like the idea, mainly because of the things it implies to me. Do you know them, hiss? :shock: Is this picture intended to be amusing? I'm asking because I see that mae laughs about something connected to it... Pamela Anders...
by fiona
Fri Jul 04, 2008 4:24 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: FISH POND...(Mlou'sDailyPIM)
Replies: 2499
Views: 864404

I didn't understand, I didn't remember. I'm sorry :oops:
by fiona
Fri Jul 04, 2008 8:02 am
Forum: Personal Blogs
Topic: In Hades w/ Hiss
Replies: 336
Views: 236406

No matter old or new, it's just great to have our own home. A house is an organism and older ones suffer from constant ailments, so keeping them healthy is a challenge, but nowadays, thanks to materials and tools' improvement, there is a number of things we can do by ourselves, like painting, wood w...
by fiona
Fri Jul 04, 2008 7:45 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: FISH POND...(Mlou'sDailyPIM)
Replies: 2499
Views: 864404

You? On the surface of what? I've no idea what you're talking about, louie. :shock: Sometimes it's not easy to fashion a coherent, not completely trite poem from the list of words they post. Do you mean poetry.com ? Long ago, when you first told me about it, I tried to get the word list from there b...
by fiona
Fri Jul 04, 2008 7:36 am
Forum: Picture Prompts
Topic: Picture Perfect - Ineffective Prohibition Ad
Replies: 24
Views: 13962

Have you noticed that there is a man among these ladies? :shock:
by fiona
Thu Jul 03, 2008 10:07 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: FISH POND...(Mlou'sDailyPIM)
Replies: 2499
Views: 864404

MOVING THROUGH LIFE I am a swimmer on the surface of waters, never knowing what lies beneath. At least someone is able to swim! :-P What are you trying to convey? Is it about not wanting/worrying/being able to have an in-depth perspective in life? Or is it intended to describe a voluntarily frivolo...
by fiona
Mon Jun 16, 2008 10:30 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: titch bliss
Replies: 3
Views: 3232

First of all, thank you very much for your attention. :-P Second, well, there is a lot to say about this piece but I am not sure it will help. So, I will try to answer at least some of your questions. What's a titch? It is an offensive or humorous term to address a small person. (BrE). What fare...t...
by fiona
Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:57 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: The Truth About Seed Puffs - Crits, please
Replies: 8
Views: 5308

One of my older sisters used to tell me stories like this. I felt them so real that I still wonder if they actually were not. I also see a fusion between faeries and witches through the weeds and seeds, since they made me think instantly of potions. I did not have problems with rhyme. Lovely, mae. :...
by fiona
Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:25 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: FISH POND...(Mlou'sDailyPIM)
Replies: 2499
Views: 864404

Isn't everything????

No, junk food is cheaper and cheaper. :roll:
by fiona
Mon Jun 16, 2008 12:04 am
Forum: Personal Blogs
Topic: In Hades w/ Hiss
Replies: 336
Views: 236406

Bon voyage to Tasty Coast, Hiss! :-P
by fiona
Mon Jun 16, 2008 12:00 am
Forum: The Coffee Shop
Topic: What are you listening to?
Replies: 931
Views: 440755

the fridge
by fiona
Sun Jun 15, 2008 11:57 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: titch bliss
Replies: 3
Views: 3232

titch bliss

(This is a response to a friend of mine from another... place :shock: ?) titch bliss One could hardly say it was a fare that made us alert, or just as scared as Enriqueta’s little dead, yet readers will want to know the back-stabbing evil and stone it with broken bricks. Whether necklaces or chains,...
by fiona
Sun Jun 15, 2008 11:54 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: FISH POND...(Mlou'sDailyPIM)
Replies: 2499
Views: 864404

ADRIFT
My thoughts are ships
that break against
winter's shoals,
my doleful cries unheeded
by wind or wave.


I know, I know... Exactly this I feel every week at the street market :roll: Vegetables are out of reach... too expensive, man :shock:
by fiona
Sat Jun 07, 2008 1:12 pm
Forum: Fast Fiction Friday
Topic: FF - Ghengis Khan's massage therapy
Replies: 15
Views: 9307

STEREOTIPICAL, I'VE NEVER SAID: prototypical. "Fiona, dear, what are you talking about?" "Always the same old question? Dear, why don't you change the script?":twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :wink: :-P Timber, by no means I think that killing people can be justi...
by fiona
Thu Jun 05, 2008 10:50 pm
Forum: Fast Fiction Friday
Topic: FF - Ghengis Khan's massage therapy
Replies: 15
Views: 9307

IMO, he died due to a bad combination of alcohol abuse, a weak heart and his very bad idea of cohabiting with a Meri-lin. Birds of a feather... In short, at first glimpse, it seems that he did what he shouldn't have done and in the wrong company. Moreover, he put himself in a helpless and shameful s...
by fiona
Thu Jun 05, 2008 12:08 am
Forum: The Coffee Shop
Topic: What are you listening to?
Replies: 931
Views: 440755

Some noise from my friend's bedroom. :shock:
by fiona
Tue Jun 03, 2008 10:08 am
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: TUESDAY POETRY CHALLENGE 5-27-08
Replies: 19
Views: 8384

Ah! A title....Hmmmm What about Diuretic musings on the wheel of time (while painting with one hand and writing with the other)? :-P
by fiona
Tue Jun 03, 2008 9:51 am
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: TUESDAY POETRY CHALLENGE 5-27-08
Replies: 19
Views: 8384

Yes, I had to go several times while I was writing it and ponder about all its different meanings. The truth is that, when I thought I got them, I didn't. Eventually, I remembered the character of a poet in the film Big Fish and found not a meaning but at least a sense to it. Grammar and syntax are ...

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