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by hisimage87
Sun Jun 25, 2006 12:43 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Heavens journey, Crit ok
Replies: 2
Views: 2311

Heavens journey, Crit ok

Wrote this a few minutes ago, and thought I'd submit it here just for fun. Its completely free style, and I wasn't really trying to stick to any particular style or rhythm. Anyway, I'm just babbling, so...\ Heavens journey Casting gently, things I’ve held onto for so many years. Passing ships in cri...
by hisimage87
Sun Jun 04, 2006 10:16 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: P.I.M. - POETRY IN MOTION
Replies: 2001
Views: 773143

That's okay, lilac...it's a good exercise. Please look at my PIM thread (FishPond) to see how I turned them into English. Hisimage...nice poem but you never got that on the PIM site! :D (You have to go to poetry.com and click on Poetry in Motion. A list of words comes up that you must make a poem f...
by hisimage87
Sun Jun 04, 2006 10:03 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: P.I.M. - POETRY IN MOTION
Replies: 2001
Views: 773143

Lights are falling
Stars are calling
Sending sweet melodies of you
Will I drown, in that dark frown
Save my spirit, so I can hear it

Those sweet melodies of you
by hisimage87
Wed May 31, 2006 11:34 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - May 30,-06
Replies: 3
Views: 3189

I'll work on it, no promises :)
by hisimage87
Fri Apr 07, 2006 10:42 pm
Forum: Announcements
Topic: Top 101 Websites Again
Replies: 23
Views: 19641

I just got my issue yesterday, and thats the first thing I checked on.

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by hisimage87
Sat Mar 04, 2006 11:35 pm
Forum: Member Introductions
Topic: Hey there
Replies: 5
Views: 5409

Great to have you, Kyelia. I think you will really enjoy things around here, like Mlou said, We have great challenges, and tons of crazy people (of which I'm a member) :D Hope to see you around the forums.

:D
by hisimage87
Tue Feb 21, 2006 6:29 pm
Forum: Fast Fiction Friday
Topic: FF - It was the brightest moon of my life
Replies: 17
Views: 20918

Something I wrote earlier this month, kinda kiddy, but I think thats the point. :) Criticism welcome He ran across the cool grass, the dew on the ground soaking his feet. The air was cool, and the sky clear, a slight breeze blowing across the field. Simon’s focus was on the kids running just ahead o...
by hisimage87
Tue Feb 21, 2006 6:01 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Feb. 21
Replies: 12
Views: 6767

Here's an answer to the "Morning has broken" thing, I used that song and one by Norah Jones, "Those Sweet Words". Criticism is welcome. :D Morning Kisses Your sweet words, making the darkness hide Those sweet words, in them I can abide Never a morn’ has broken, the flow is sometimes token, Dreams be...
by hisimage87
Tue Feb 21, 2006 2:01 am
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Feb. 21
Replies: 12
Views: 6767

The grape fruit thing sounds fun, and Morning has Broken in full of poetic potential 8) I've really been slacking in the poetry challenges of late :( Hope to get back in soon.
by hisimage87
Sun Feb 12, 2006 12:12 am
Forum: Member Introductions
Topic: Starting to write...again
Replies: 10
Views: 6969

Keep writing, I've had the same problem in My home, the lack of support can really hurt, and writing alone can be miserable. :(

But I've really enjoyed Wordtrip, and the people here are all really fun and supportive :D

Hope to see ya around the forums, and please keep writing :D
by hisimage87
Mon Feb 06, 2006 12:41 am
Forum: Fast Fiction Friday
Topic: FF - A dreaded conversation
Replies: 9
Views: 6877

I did this within the thirty minute time limit, it needs a lot of editing, but I thought I'd just stick this draft up, seeing that nobody ever replied to this fast fiction challenge. :-D The Review. I wasn’t looking forward to this talk, and it wasn’t just the fact that it was My job was at stake, b...
by hisimage87
Sun Feb 05, 2006 10:41 pm
Forum: Member Introductions
Topic: Greetings from CT
Replies: 9
Views: 6600

Welcome to wordtrip, I'm on MySpace to, so I'll have to add you to My friend list:)

Hope you enjoy the forums, see ya around. :D
by hisimage87
Sun Feb 05, 2006 1:31 am
Forum: Fast Fiction Friday
Topic: FF - Junk mail and a cup of coffee
Replies: 13
Views: 9494

I wrote this after work, kinda just a stream of consciousness rant, but thats kinda what the fast fiction challenge is, right? It was done in just under 30 minutes. :roll: Jennifer sat there after work, no junk mail to look at, that is unless you count a few emails that seemed a little unnecessary. ...
by hisimage87
Sun Jan 29, 2006 10:40 am
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Jan. 24, 2006
Replies: 24
Views: 14872

Good...that wasn't an easy list. Or not MY kind of list anyway. :) Maybe I should try to do one from it for the challenge! I like some of your images...the train rolling on, pillow drifting dreams. You use drift again. Try to avoid that. Your stick figure image is interesting...where would you take...
by hisimage87
Sun Jan 29, 2006 12:11 am
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Jan. 24, 2006
Replies: 24
Views: 14872

It's late and this is the best I could do from the word list, I did finally get that book you mentioned Miou, The Art and Craft of Poetry, By Michael J. Bugeja. So maybe My stuff will improve soon. Until then, bear with Me :) love peace train pillow insanity tragedy Train food- The love causes peace...
by hisimage87
Sat Jan 28, 2006 11:45 pm
Forum: Fast Fiction Friday
Topic: FF - Don't get me started!
Replies: 2
Views: 2871

Just to get things rolling :D Here goes nothing. I did stay in the thirty minute limit with a couple to spare. :shock: First it had been Monday, then next week, and now back to next Monday, how many times can you change an appointment? I mean really, what does a guy have to do get things right in th...
by hisimage87
Sat Jan 21, 2006 1:19 am
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Jan. 17
Replies: 12
Views: 6568

My answer to the weather theme ( I thought I’d try free style). 1. Snow Clings The gentle falling breeze, heart warms in memory. So distant now, winters free to pass, thoughts melt into you. It doesn’t matter if I cry, sting of things endeared. The seasons fall away, and we drift like lost balloons....
by hisimage87
Thu Jan 19, 2006 12:58 am
Forum: Member Introductions
Topic: New member
Replies: 18
Views: 11993

Welcome Danny, I'm pretty new here Myself, but have thus far enjoyed it immensely, I think you will to :D

See ya around.
by hisimage87
Thu Jan 19, 2006 12:46 am
Forum: Fast Fiction Friday
Topic: FF - Boombox Betty
Replies: 4
Views: 4592

I meant to leave the story vague, it was an attempt to avoid one of the classic pit falls of beginning writers, that they tell you what they want you to think, rather than show you something and let you decide what to think. Show, don’t tell, I hate it when a writer is telling me exactly how somethi...
by hisimage87
Tue Jan 17, 2006 11:18 pm
Forum: Fast Fiction Friday
Topic: FF - Boombox Betty
Replies: 4
Views: 4592

(This is the first draft of the story, I got it done in just over 30 minutes) She was known as BoomBox Betty, walking the streets day after day, nothing driving Her, somehow justified by the senseless noise that came from Her sole companion. She hadn’t always been like this, no this was the result o...
by hisimage87
Sun Jan 15, 2006 2:52 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: Poetry Challenge - January 10
Replies: 17
Views: 8369

Now the third challenge 3. Tears of the night. Working through your day Steady stream of pay Smiles come and go You don’t mean it though The lights of morning dim Your thoughts drift to Him Could He love your eyes Green empty like rainy sky Tears though your night Steady streams of fright Dreams ris...
by hisimage87
Sun Jan 15, 2006 2:38 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: Poetry Challenge - January 10
Replies: 17
Views: 8369

2. Parting. Kissing like a breeze Seeing vanilla blurs Long hair falling, please, Don’t cry those tears I can’t change the days Parting again delays The sweet taste of you Kissing like a breeze Seeing no more blur Long hair fades, please, Don’t see my tears P.S. I'm looking for some good books to le...
by hisimage87
Sun Jan 15, 2006 2:54 am
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: Poetry Challenge - January 10
Replies: 17
Views: 8369

Mlou wrote:Where is everyone? The "regulars" have been missing for a while.

Liked your list poem, ms. Can I guess those are among your favorite words? :twisted:


Sorry, I've been really busy, I hope to add some tomorrow though.
by hisimage87
Sat Jan 14, 2006 1:28 pm
Forum: Announcements
Topic: Wordtrip Podcast
Replies: 73
Views: 61113

I just listened to the Podcast Charles, great work, keep it up. You guys have done a great job with this community.
by hisimage87
Sat Jan 07, 2006 9:15 pm
Forum: Poetry Prompts
Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Jan. 3
Replies: 3
Views: 3354

Here goes nothing. :? 1. They say your My Diamond They say many things I say nothing defined I feel My heart strings We see the sun descend We see our dreams By Hisimage87 2. Nothing found My Eye Might as well Die Maybe I don’t try Feeling like a sigh Color gone goodbye Nothing left in the sky Breat...

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