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by purty_trash
Thu Jul 27, 2006 11:25 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: FISH POND...(Mlou'sDailyPIM)
Replies: 2499
Views: 949318

Good one, Mlou. :-D
by purty_trash
Thu Jul 27, 2006 11:22 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Haiku for me, Haiku for you
Replies: 2317
Views: 1062881

er....a babbling river is still?

I guess I'll hafta look at the picture to get this one.
by purty_trash
Thu Jul 27, 2006 11:19 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: P.I.M. - POETRY IN MOTION
Replies: 2001
Views: 847422

great work poets, here's my regular pat on the back. Keep it up! :-D
by purty_trash
Wed Jul 19, 2006 8:04 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Haiku for me, Haiku for you
Replies: 2317
Views: 1062881

Way to go, both of you. Very vivid descriptions here. I'll keep patting your shoulders until I get the motivation to join in. :-D
by purty_trash
Sun Jul 16, 2006 8:11 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: pengwenn's Magnetic Poetry
Replies: 31
Views: 17431

Hey PG, just caught up on this. amazing poems. Wish I could write like all you envialble people here. In the meantime I can only bulge my eyeballs, drop my jaw and wonder. :-D
by purty_trash
Sun Jul 16, 2006 6:30 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Haiku for me, Haiku for you
Replies: 2317
Views: 1062881

ya we do get summer vacs Mlou, but I spend most of it covering my syllabus and a part in writing. I've got four short stories and an incomplete fifth. All have been the products of summer vacs. :-D
by purty_trash
Sat Jul 15, 2006 11:29 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Haiku for me, Haiku for you
Replies: 2317
Views: 1062881

Hey Mlou checked out your Haikus. Great work! You havfe this amazing eye for beauty in every situation that never ceases to enthrall me. Just back from exams and all. Two tough months. I'm begining to look more like a zombie now who returns back alive (from death) after every period of examination. ...
by purty_trash
Thu May 11, 2006 1:37 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Haiku for me, Haiku for you
Replies: 2317
Views: 1062881

Great work Pen, Mlou and snowbird. Really liked the bit about 'mountain's shoulders', 'victims of the storm' and 'blanket of peace'. Have seen the snow only once, though.
by purty_trash
Fri May 05, 2006 7:53 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: FISH POND...(Mlou'sDailyPIM)
Replies: 2499
Views: 949318

Very good imagination Mlou. Loved it!
by purty_trash
Tue May 02, 2006 1:38 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: FISH POND...(Mlou'sDailyPIM)
Replies: 2499
Views: 949318

still cries in the woman ravaged by time. Isn't that little unspecific a cause and a trifle bit pessimistic as a result? It's difficult to get a hold on the circumstances when you can't pretty much blame anything else but 'time'. But you've told a lot in a few lines - just the way you always are ab...
by purty_trash
Tue May 02, 2006 1:30 am
Forum: The Writer's Life - Techniques, Characterization, Writing Ideas, & More
Topic: What's Your Title???
Replies: 40
Views: 23027

Well, I've just got this creepy sensation that maybe I didn't fill out the options right. :( :roll:

Oh, Hell! I'll just stick to the score and feel good. :D
by purty_trash
Tue May 02, 2006 1:27 am
Forum: The Writer's Life - Techniques, Characterization, Writing Ideas, & More
Topic: What's Your Title???
Replies: 40
Views: 23027

83.1% for one of my short stories!!! :D Didn't try for others.
by purty_trash
Mon May 01, 2006 3:40 pm
Forum: Picture Prompts
Topic: PP - Car on a Wire
Replies: 11
Views: 7551

Very good Mlou, you truly got the picture. :-D
by purty_trash
Mon May 01, 2006 3:35 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: FISH POND...(Mlou'sDailyPIM)
Replies: 2499
Views: 949318

amazing visuals in 'SEPTEMBER', Mlou. Crisp blade of autumn- very good, indeed. :-D
by purty_trash
Mon May 01, 2006 3:35 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: FISH POND...(Mlou'sDailyPIM)
Replies: 2499
Views: 949318

amazing visuals in 'SEPTEMBER', Mlou. Crisp blade of autumn- very good, indeed. :-D
by purty_trash
Mon May 01, 2006 1:17 am
Forum: Picture Prompts
Topic: PP - Tomcat Rear Cockpit
Replies: 9
Views: 10572

A rock guitar buzzed somewhere in the pilot’s head as he twisted his bird in the sky. To say it was exciting was an understatement. The pilot could feel his pulse fighting like some mad snake as his heart pounded his ears with heavy drum beats. It was fear and freedom, exhilaration and enchantment –...
by purty_trash
Mon May 01, 2006 1:02 am
Forum: Picture Prompts
Topic: PP - Car on a Wire
Replies: 11
Views: 7551

Maybe I can do better than this. But here's a start at least. :-D The white car dangling precariously from the electric wires didn't make a pretty sight. "I think they should put up 'no parking' a sign or something." A woman breathed as she walked by. It was quite funny, the way the car hung there, ...
by purty_trash
Sat Apr 29, 2006 10:27 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Moonlight : Crit Please
Replies: 3
Views: 2757

Hey Mlou thanks. Actually I read your poems from time to time, I just don't let you notice it :-D I enjoy reading you a lot, actually. I think I'll chip in my comments every now and then just to let you know that I hang around. :wink: Will replace drape's accomplice. I meant LIKE the first female. W...
by purty_trash
Sat Apr 29, 2006 3:55 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Moonlight : Crit Please
Replies: 3
Views: 2757

Moonlight : Crit Please

Hi. Mlou would tell you that I'm not very regular with my poems. I just write them once in a while but I'd love to improve. This one represents my complete obsession with the moonlight :D and also hopes to compare moonlight with The Perfect Woman (that I know for sure is none :-D but I'll settle for...
by purty_trash
Sun Mar 12, 2006 10:43 am
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: FISH POND...(Mlou'sDailyPIM)
Replies: 2499
Views: 949318

Hey, I've been posting stories in my own group. They've been collecting fair amount of applause. I'll mail them to you and then if you've got time on your hands you can go through them. I'll try to be bold. Actually a lot's on stake. I'm in India, which is still a somewhat reserved (coy actually) co...
by purty_trash
Sat Mar 11, 2006 12:02 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: FISH POND...(Mlou'sDailyPIM)
Replies: 2499
Views: 949318

Great work Mlou, Even though I'm writing little poetry, I do drop in from time to time to see what you write. To say that it's beautiful would be an understatement. :clap: JOY- happens to be the name of the girl whom I have got a crush upon. But she chooses to ignore me. :( Your poem certainly evoke...
by purty_trash
Fri Sep 30, 2005 5:54 am
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: Trash's Paper Dump Box
Replies: 13
Views: 9950

Looked at my prologue again. It sounds utterly confusing. But maybe i should wait until i chalk out the plot a bit futher.
by purty_trash
Wed Sep 28, 2005 3:11 pm
Forum: Pondering Poetry - Share poems, work on form, learn types of poetry
Topic: Haiku for me, Haiku for you
Replies: 2317
Views: 1062881

They sure are Mlou. some are so beautiful they really moved me. I just went through some of those posted in the previous pages.

I think I'll give poetry.com a try, though i much rather prefer a picture from my mind. :-D .
by purty_trash
Wed Sep 28, 2005 2:54 am
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: Trash's Paper Dump Box
Replies: 13
Views: 9950

Alright here's a start: I've finally decided to add the prologue. I'll still have to research the minor details. some of which i've mentioned in my prologue, but atleast its a start. If anybody sees this one, lemme know how you feel. Does this really look like a Prologue? Something which pulls you o...
by purty_trash
Wed Sep 28, 2005 12:54 am
Forum: Writing and Poetry Blogs
Topic: Trash's Paper Dump Box
Replies: 13
Views: 9950

SF would be so much easier if there were no existing theories . . . yeah, but then it wouldn't be sci-fi at all. it'd be fantasy and anybody could cook that. 8) . anyways, if one cared to look at all these books about cosmology they look more like fantasy then sci-fi. And get up from the floor Anbl...

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